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  1. Hugh Jarce
    March 13, 2017

    The bullies at City Hall and the cowards at Sixth Floor Museum have finally been exposed for what they are. Bob Groden finally gets the long overdue victory that his resilience and his courage deserve.

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  2. Nemo
    March 17, 2017

    I find being a grammar nazi distasteful, but this sentence was too much for me:

    “Groden’s lawsuit against the city of Dallas detailed a conspiracy between employees of the Sixth Floor, the city council and at least one cop named Frank Gorka.”

    As written, one is left wondering whether or not there’s more than one cop named Frank Gorka working for the Dallas PD. Were it the only infraction, I’d let it pass, but alas, it isn’t.

    Which leads to the mnemonic jest, “What caused the elf riot at the North Pole? Santa didn’t take good care of his subordinate Clauses.” Words are supposed to have meanings, but poor punctuation can blur those meanings.

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